Formal Writing#3: El Ambiente

Es verdad que el mayor problema ambiental de nuestra comunidad es contaminación. En la entrevista y artículo, los dos artículos son similares. Los artículos piensan que hay muchos problemas en nuestras comunidades y el mundo. Necesitan menos contaminación. Muchas contaminaciones en el mundo. Por ejemplo, tengan contaminados de los ríos y las playas, los coches producen contaminación del aire. También las gentes abusando la energía y destruyen muchos bosques. >>Recuperar la tierra>> Es verdad. El mundo necesitan muchos protecciones, cambiar sistemas, tomar acciones y mas controles de ambiental. Finalmente, necesitan educaciones sobre protección de ambiental y las participaciones de todas gentes. Toma acciones.

Name:
rizal
Date:
12/17/07
Assignment:
formal writing #3
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
yes

I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes

I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes

I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes

I try to make my writing interesting.
yes

I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
yes

I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes

I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes

I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes

If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes

I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes

I check my spelling.
yes

I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes

I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes

I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
yes

I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes

What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
i wrote a lot of information about this matter. i used vocabularies that i have remembered and learned.

What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
like the other writings, i could have written more