Friday, October 19, 2007

formal speaking #2: tierra




Name of Speaker:
rizal
Name of Reviewer:
rizal
Assignment:
formal speaking #2
Date:
12/17/07
The presentation was understandable.
4


The information was important and interesting.
5


The speech was organized with a main idea and details.
5


There were few grammar errors interfering with the message:subject/verb agreementverb tensesword ordergender distinctions
5


The speaker used correct word stress and intonation.
5


The speaker used visual materials as needed:transparencies, chalkboard, posters/paper
5


The speaker used effective body language:facial expressions, eye contact, hand gestures
5


1. Strengths of the presentation:
i had a lot to say about the planet. the subject was very important.

2. Suggested improvements:
harder vocabulary and louder voice

3 comments:

GANGSTA said...

i LOVED this formal speaking abouth the earth. it was wonderful!!!! Next time i htink you should speak louder. peace

GANGSTA said...

Name of Speaker:Rizal
Name of Reviewer:Lacey
Assignment:Formal speaking tierra
Date:

Agree Disagree


The presentation was understandable.
5
The information was important and interesting.
5
The speech was organized with a main idea and details.
4
There were few grammar errors interfering with the message: subject/verb agreementverb tensesword ordergender distinctions
4
The speaker spoke loudly and clearly.
5
The speaker used correct word stress and intonation.
5
The speaker used visual materials as needed:transparencieschalkboardposters/paper
3
The speaker used effective body language:facial expressionseye contacthand gesture
5

Strengths of the presentation:
You talked loud

Suggested improvements:
speak a litttle longer

KyraMadison said...

Presentational Speaking: Self- and Peer-Assessment
Name of Speaker:
Rizal
Name of Reviewer:
Christine
Assignment:
Formal Speaking #2
Date:
12/17/07

(1 is highest)
The presentation was understandable.
1

The information was important and interesting.
1

The speech was organized with a main idea and details.
1

There were few grammar errors interfering with the message:subject/verb agreementverb tensesword ordergender distinctions
2

The speaker spoke loudly and clearly.
1

The speaker used correct word stress and intonation.
2

The speaker used visual materials as needed:transparencies, chalkboard, posters/paper
1

The speaker used effective body language:facial expressions, eye contact, hand gestures
1

1. Strengths of the presentation:
You spoke well about the topic.

2. Suggested improvements:
Continue practicing your comfort with speaking, it can only help to improve it. :)