Yo acabo de llegar a Rome, donde voy a participar en un programa de intercambio. El viaje fue bueno y cansado! Me llegó a Rome a las dos de la tarde. La familia con quien me voy a quedar es muy divertida y esta cuidando. En la familia, son tres hijos y dos hijas. Yo tomará los cursos de español, matemáticas, ciencias, y historia de Tierra. Voy a hacer excursiones de otras ciudades de España. Soy muy interesado sobre las excursiones. Esta bien, voy a escribir una carta para tu en otra día. Adiós señora.
Hasta luego,Rizal
Name:
rizal
Date:
12/17/07
Assignment:
informal writing #3
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
yes
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes
I try to make my writing interesting.
yes
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
yes
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes
I check my spelling.
no
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
yes
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
writing valuable informations.
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
Increase the amount of writing i do.
3 comments:
Student Writer:
Rizal
Student Reviewer:
Brianna
Assignment:
Informal Writing # 3
Date:
10/26/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
4
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
4
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
Student Writer:
Rizal
Student Reviewer:
Lacey
Assignment:
Informal Writing # 3
Date:
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
4
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
i thought your assignment was really good!! kepp up the good work. maybe you can write more next time.
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