informal writing #2

Hola José
¿Como estás señor? Estoy muy alegre. Quiero darle gracias para tu ayudo con mi carrera. Gracias para la entrevista ayer. Yo era muy nervioso durante la entrevista pero después darme a relajar, era no nervioso. Cuando trabajaba con tu, yo aprendo que un doctor necesito mucha paciencia y necesito a entender personas con problemas. Es una carrera muy emocionante también y quiero darte gracias para tu tiempo e información. Estoy muy triste y muchas gracias.
Rizal

Name:
rizal
Date:
12/17/07
Assignment:
informal writing #2
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
yes

I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes

I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes

I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes

I try to make my writing interesting.
yes

I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
yes

I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes

I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes

I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes

If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes

I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes

I check my spelling.
yes

I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes

I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes

I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
yes

I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes

What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
i used difficult vocabularies and i think i wrote very well on this writing.

What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
i should start writing more.